Belongings
by Bev Hewlett
Not a detailed memory,
not rich or ripe or saturated
with fascinating information.
No, underfed
in some particulars-
date, time, weather, exact location;
except, this is the hospital,
and you are dead.
No awkwardness, as I recall,
until this trap-door moment:
the red soap bag handed over (and signed for)
is so little of you. I fall;
the wonderless soap bag, with
the two false teeth (you never wore)
held to my waterfalling face.
This is my all.
Judge's Comments - Dawn Gorman
All poetry competitions inevitably, it seems, bring in a crop of poems about death, and ours was no exception, with one in five touching on the subject, but this one, quiet, simple, pulling no punches, I found overwhelmingly moving. Many will identify with that "trap-door moment". Straight from the poet's heart to that of the reader.