O.S.
by Stephen Payne
Here's to the similar pleasures
of unfolding and scale, the flap of a sail
as I smooth it over a tabletop.
Here's to its democracy,
its even-handed concern
for trading estate and forest, roundabout and hill.
Look at those calm pastels
and fine-nibbed symbols,
lines that join, lines that separate.
Trace the arc
of this bridleway through the darker green.
No need for photographs
as I follow that Sunday walk
beneath the overhang of trees
eavesdropping our conversation.
And here's to my index finger's
abrupt leap
for less trammelled coordinates,
leaving the dank
heavy air to contour fly with the swallows.
Judge's Comments - Dawn Gorman
The joy of this poem - about something so seemingly mundane as an Ordnance Survey map (on the face of it, at least) - is its lightness of touch. Just a suggestion of an oppressive relationship, so subtle it is just a whisper, but the reader understands perfectly that need to escape... our world reduced in scale, to a map and the leap of an index finger. A fine achievement.