Drifting
by Graham Burchell
The shadow of a floating leaf rides
silt and gravel in the brook
without disturbing a grain, better
than a drag of silk. It's lazy:
summer is; the water warmed
because it has no depth.
Rain is a memory. I imagine
that heart-shaped shadow as fingers,
her fingers and hers and hers - slow
loving, lightest touch, the furthest
back in time barely remembered,
like the soft rock of all our childhoods,
washed away.
Judge's Comments - Dawn Gorman
This short poem is like a meditation, its images producing a soporific effect on the reader, and, although apparently light and gentle ("floating leaf", "heart-shaped shadow") have their own hypnotic power. The penultimate line, "soft rock of all our childhoods" is very memorable.